-name: Adrea
-age: timeless
-gender: a lone girl on a blank page
-interests: reading, creative writing, imagining, mathematics (calc especially), and living this dream you call my life.
I don't Know you. Who are you? What do you think of this world, of what is has to offer, of me? Why are you sad? How do I make it better? What makes you laugh innocently again? Why do you smile? What do you dream of? Where is your secret escape from the world? I want to know you Want you to know me but want I wonder most of all: what do you want?
This emotion you're trying to convey is a difficult one, I know.
It kind of reminds me of trains of thought that all of us go down, not truly knowing where to go, on what to put our foot down to balance for the next step. The confusion and sense of shifting back and forth between crossroads is very evident and the short lines lend to the shifty back-and-forth rhythm and sense.
3 Comments:
I really like this one, Kelsey. Is this written about a specific someone? *cough*
I agree!
This emotion you're trying to convey is a difficult one, I know.
It kind of reminds me of trains of thought that all of us go down, not truly knowing where to go, on what to put our foot down to balance for the next step. The confusion and sense of shifting back and forth between crossroads is very evident and the short lines lend to the shifty back-and-forth rhythm and sense.
Bravo. :)
PS-
IT'S ALIIIIVE! Again...
o.O
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